How is this prologue for a steampunk fantasy story?

I really like it, Lily! I've been waiting for a piece from this story :} My only problem, and it may be because I've been away from editing for a bit and I'm uber tired right now, but sometimes the wording seems a bit off. Mainly in the beginning. "Through her earpiece, Naomi heard the sweet voice softly sing," maybe something more like "The sweet, soft voice sung,"... or not, haha. Blech, ignore all that. It's great!